[2] My interests and goal as a major are to be in communications. I requested to take journalism as one of my classes to have experience in that field of study. It was to my dismay that I was no longer able to take that class for my senior year because of a required class I had to take. Schools traditionally have two goals: (1) to help each student gain personal fulfillment and (2) to help create good citizens. Why, then, are they forcing students to take classes they don’t want to take? Why am I not able to take journalism even though it is fulfilling my personal goals?
What type of evidence does the student use in
this paragraph of the essay?
The evidence used in the paragraph is from a personal view point, but also from a peer point of view. They have seen this not just in their life, but others. This cuts down on the bias.
